1. Who is Joannie Rochette?
-Joannie Rochette is a professional ice-skater for the canadian team for the olympics.
2. Why are the media giving her so much attention this week?
-The media is giving her so much attention because Joannie's mother was goin to watch her compete and she got off the airplane and had a stroke, she died the day before Joannie competed.
3. How successful are you at putting your personal life on hold before coming to class or starting a shift at work? Use details.
4. What do you think of Joannie Rochette's story? How extraordinary do you think she is?
-i think Joannies Rochette's story is prety is awsome, and she is really extraordinary.
5. Explain whether hearing about how she managed to give her best effort so soon after her personal tragedy inspires you. Why or why not?
-it impresses me alot because its so tragic that happend right before she competed and did her best.
It's nice to have you in the course and working. Let's get some momentum going.
ReplyDeleteA couple of tips to start: Make sure each sentence begins with a capital letter "It impresses me..."
You should always press the spell check button before you post. I think it would have caught 'i' (should be capitalized), 'alot' (always 2 words) and awsome (spelled 'awesome')
So please forgive me, I'll be giving you 1 or 2 little things to work on every couple of days or so. As long as you respond, you'll see a change in your writing after only a few weeks.