Writing conventions

1. she claims she was playing Frisbee with her Friends at the park when the flying dog of doom assaulted her out of no were the police and paramedics believe the dog was attracted to the blue of her jacket and was enraged by it.



2. Today i finished my News Report , that i did on Thursday ; but now im workin on this .

-Today i finished my News Report that I did on thursday, but now im working on this.

3. It didnt change my mind but I think of high school better.

-It did not change my mind, but I think of high school better.

4. I did not watch the hole movie.

-I did not watch the whole mlovie.

5. i do not like to writ books or paragraph.

-I do not like to write books or paragraphs.

6. actually i found the movie very entertaining cause i understanded all of it.

-Actually I found the movie very entertaining because I understood all of it.

7. I think theyre targeting people who would thing what it is like to be hang over and people who loves comedy.

-I think they're targeting people who would think, what is it like to be hung over and people who love comedy.

8. pilot ejected him from a Southwest Airlines flight from Oakland to Burbank, California, saying he didn't fit properly in a single seat.

-The pilot ejected himself from a Southwest Airlines flight from Oakland to Burbank, California, Saying he did not fit properly in a single seat.

9. I write good enough that you can read it with perfectly grammer.

-I write well enough that you can read it without difficulty.

10. I dont write that much but im prety confident about my ability.

-I don't write that much, but I'm prety confident about my ability.

11. The reason why I think Mrs. Martin and Mr. Pierce chose this film because it show us that anyone can write.

-The reason why I think Mrs.Martin and Mr.Pierce chose this film is because it shows us that anyone can write.

12. Yes because its show that anyone can do what they want if they try and different ethnic groups can be friends with each other

-Yes, because it shows that anyone can do what they want if they try, different ethnic groups can be freinds with each other.

13. I did start it Thursday afternoon , but then i ran outta time , so just a few minutes ago i just finished it.

-I did start it thursday afternoon, but I ran out of time, so just a few minuts ago I finished it.


14. I hope i have a better english experience using the computers.

-I hope I have a better english experience using the computers.

15. The movie I enjoy most is The Hang Over it was histarical.

-The movie that I enjoy the most is the The Hang Over, it was histarical!.